Reader, I finished the first chapter but could not go any further. The writing (or maybe copyediting) of this book is atrocious.
I know that in this day and age commas are misunderstood beasts of punctuation. As someone very invested in eradicating comma splices from my students’ writing, I tend to lean on the side of using fewer commas when in doubt. Yet this book takes that position to the extreme. The result are torturous…